You didn't really give the tiles next to yours anything definate from which to work. I think it would be great on its own, but it doesn't share any objects with its friends. Your "inking in vigilant tears" is an excellent example of a tile that works on its own, and with its neighbors. That being said, I like this work. I would like to see this done on a larger scale. Maybe oil pastels or something. I dunno. Just a thought. ;0