If you put text on a tile, you need to draw it or make it less apparent... text like that usually takes away from the tile.

Beautiful! Thanks, drawing no problem.
That is it? Only the text? I thought people didn't like the abstract colour and form.
Sigh, well the text was the more important subject of the tile.
The title daycare window.
...when she was young, crying into her bear feeling alone and insecure...
The daycare woman hit her for putting a toy lamb into a toy bulldozer, snapping "that doesn't go there..."

Yeah, the text generally brings a tile down. I kind of like the little squares and stuff. *shrug* When I draw tiles I generally try to please the public, rather than making it all about things I like or putting text on it (which, no matter how deep and thought provoking or wonderful it may be, makes the quilt seem discontinuitous.) But oh well, do whatever you want with it, some people are always gonna dislike it and others will love it. If you really want to express yourself in art though, tiles isn't a very easy place to do it. Although.. not impossible... just small area to work with and lots of constrictions. Better idea to make your own image and show it to your friends. That's where most of the fun of expression in art comes from.

But I need more friends.
*sigh*
Not that I have no friends just they all are far away and seldom seen.

And as well, I do not beleive that it made the quilt discontinuitous, that the text makes a good narative to the events surrounding it, but that was a big coinkydink. But I am still learning the faux pas dans le grand quilt.